Your suggestions are all great--I especially appreciate the ones on re-organizing the initial letter, I know that's confusing still (for the first version of the kit, it was pretty awful :-)). And offering additional instructions on organizing the files is great, too. I really appreciate your giving me such extensive feedback!
Its not my area of expertise but you have written some very interesting and intelligent posts (as others have also noticed on the board); can you think of anything that might answer his question?
Any ideas? As always feel free to post your link/sig info at the end if you do offer any comments.
Tim Mahoney, iVerify Board Moderator
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